Post by Anastasia Beck on Feb 7, 2013 23:55:41 GMT -5
1. Edit the Chapters
2. Make it 3rd person
3. More description where needed
4. Possibly make it so that she watches over George for a few days while he's unconscious before she's allowed to drop him back off at the Order.
5. Add prequel scenes
6. Add a few more detailed torture scenes
2. Make it 3rd person
3. More description where needed
4. Possibly make it so that she watches over George for a few days while he's unconscious before she's allowed to drop him back off at the Order.
5. Add prequel scenes
6. Add a few more detailed torture scenes